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With the popularity of English growing by the day it is becoming a global language. Many people now neglect their own mother tongue and prefer to learn English. What are the problems that could arise if everyone adopts English as a language? Offer some solutions to this problem.

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In the current fast-paced world,
English
 is the
language
 most people use in their own businesses. Obviously,
this
 is the only
language
 becoming popular. There are many advantages and disadvantages if depends on only one
language
 rather than one native
language
.
Firstly
, as noticed, many business institutes are running in
English
language
, even more than local
languages
.
For example
, all construction industries make contracts using
this
language
,
however
 availability of local
languages
. More and more employees having good knowledge
in
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English
 will get good opportunities from the global markets. Nowadays, tourism is developed widely in every country. Tourists, who want to visit other countries can communicate with local people using
this
language
. Learning global
languages
 creates more opportunities in different sectors across the world.
Secondly
, using more other national
languages
 than the mother tongue may lead to disappear. Many Governments realised and started some new programs to protect their local
languages
. Completely depending on global
language
, might be a chance to forget the culture where we came from. In modern days, kids are unable to read newspapers in other
languages
 rather than in
English
. Because of being forced to learn a global
language
 by teachers and parents. Local
languages
 are likely a bonding to their native peoples separated from others.
To sum up
, learning
English
 is good for getting more opportunities in future
nevertheless
, the mother tongue is more important to keep our culture alive.
Although
, everyone should respect and learn the mother
language
 first.
This
 is the responsibility taken from the government and individuals.
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