You have a bicycle that you are no longer using. You would like to sell it to a friend. Write a letter to your friend. In your Letter •Explain why you are no longer using your bicycle. •Describe your bicycle. •Explain why you think your friend would like to have it. Write at least 150 words you do not need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows Dear--------

Dear Mark, How have you been ? Hope everything is good with your family and you. Do you still remember my craze about driving bikes? I bought a bicycle one year ago, hoping to use it on a regular basis. But I got a good job opportunity far from my home town.
Finally
, in spite of wanting to keep it with me, I could not make it.
Furthermore
, the vehicle is concerned it is from Hero Electric and the model I own is the Hero Electo in red colour.
In addition
, the cycle is an e-cycle so needs to change for a maximum of 6 hours and runs for 35 km. I have personally cared for it to be in good condition. I have been thinking of selling it to you as you have the same enthusiasm for bike riding.
Moreover
, the bike is
also
useful for both urban and rural life. I know it will be really helpful for you and
also
for the younger kids in your family. I hope to have your response as soon as possible. Take care. Your loving friend, Jen.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • firstly
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  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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