Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by AI robots. What is your opinion?

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state-of-the-art
technology
, artificial intelligence
technology
has invaded
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humankind's
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workforce unprecedentedly. It is an undeniable fact that
,
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thanks to the burgeoning of
technology
,
the
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robots
will be substituted for monotonous and repetitive
works
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.
However
, some
jobs
such
as health and education sector will be continued by
humankind
. In my opinion despite the fact that artificial intelligence
robots
will
be replaced
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menial
works
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including
cashier
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cashiers
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and bankers,some
jobs
that require emotional intuition and hand-eye coordination will not be taken over.
Thus
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essay will discuss reasons why
robots
be suitable for only some
jobs
and others need
humankind
with my logical conclusion. Beyond any shred of doubt,
robots
can eventually replace tedious and repetitive
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tasks that do not require specific and complex human skills
such
as
cashier
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cashiers
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and bankers.
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to say ,owing to the
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cost
than
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hiring, training and employing humans, loads of companies will replace
robots
to make work easier.
For instance
, most of the supermarkets in Australia, have replaced automated cash payment systems which are more efficient and less costly than hiring
humankind
.
Moreover
,
robots
do not require holidays, rest and sleep and
also
they
work-around
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the clock.
Thus
, robotic automation can be supplanted for menial
jobs
.
Conversely
, there are some
jobs
which are
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the abilities of
robots
such
as psychology, healthcare and teaching will be done by human beings. To be more precise,
jobs
that require
especial
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hand eye
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coordination will not be taken over by
robots
.
That is
to
say
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doctor's
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doctors'
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diagnose
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and human intelligence will be helped to save
patients
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life.
similarly
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in teaching, keen observation and
command
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attention over each student have always
been
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contributed to
gain
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better outcomes.
For instance
,
robots
can not substitute a nurse who
take
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care
for
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a critically ill patient. Because it is
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process involving human rights and ethics.
Hence
, many complex tasks that need human skills and judgement will not be supplanted by
robots
.
To conclude
, it is clearly explicit that , despite invading repetitive tasks by robotic automation,
jobs
which
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of therapeutic touch and empathy cannot be replaced. If the government impose taxes for using AI
Technology
, ultimately the scarcity of skilled occupations would not
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negative
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a negative
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impact
to
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the country's economy
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • artificial intelligence (AI)
  • automation
  • robotics
  • futuristic developments
  • analyze data
  • analytical precision
  • human capabilities
  • emotional intelligence
  • human interaction
  • human oversight
  • strategic decision-making
  • nuances of human judgment
  • technological landscape
  • intrinsic human qualities
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