The graph and chart below give information on the average daily maximum and minimum temperatures in degrees Celsius (°C) and the average number of days with rainfall each month for two Australian cities. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The given graph and bar chart
shows
information about average daily temperatures and Correct subject-verb agreement
show
rainfall
in Brisbane
and Canada within a year
. Overal
, Correct your spelling
Overall
Brisbane
is far heat in temperature than Canbera
and Correct your spelling
Canberra
also
experincing
high Correct your spelling
experiencing
rainfal
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rainfall
in
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at
early
and end of the Correct article usage
the early
year
.
According to
the data, maximum
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the maximum
tempetarure
of Correct your spelling
temperature
Brisbane
city almost
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is almost
degree
celcius Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
wich
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which
the
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is the
mininum
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minimum
just
about 11 Change preposition
of just
degree
celcius in Fix the agreement mistake
degrees
mid-
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mid-year
year
. Moreover
, it also
have
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has
highest
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the highest
number of
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apply
rainfall
which is 2 fold higher than Canbera
from January to April while
in
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from
Juni
to September Correct your spelling
June
rainfall
number getting
lower than Verb problem
is
Canbera
city. In the Change preposition
in Canbera
last
two month
of the Fix the agreement mistake
months
year
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,year
rainfall
duration is back
getting higher.
Rephrase
apply
How ever
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However
Canbera
in
far humid even Correct your spelling
is
reach
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reaching
the
lowest temperature Change the word
its
to
0 Change preposition
of
degree
celcius Change to a plural noun
degrees
in
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from
Juni
to August. The average Correct your spelling
June
rainfall
is lower than Brisbane
; Change preposition
in Brisbane
however
in the Add a comma
,however
mid
of Correct your spelling
middle
year
the frequency Correct article usage
the year
far
higher and stable, even though it Add a missing verb
is far
getting
higher to 10 to 12 days Wrong verb form
gets
during
November to December.Change preposition
from
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rainfall, brisbane, year, canbera with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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