The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram provides information about how

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from

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canes

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is made.

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, juices are healthy

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our body and

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it

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gives vitamin C.

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, there are seven steps in the whole process. Beginning with growing the

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canes

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, harvesting

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two different

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ways, crushing, purifying for safety,

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with high hot temperature, centrifuge and

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drying with cooling. In the first stage, growing the

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canes

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from 12 to 18 months. After that, harvesting using

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and a human. Following, crushing

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canes

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with a small machine to trans it directly a

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and purifying the

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to be cleaned for folks when buying

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using the limestone filter.

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, evaporation

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juice

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by heating

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become syrup. In the final stage, is the centrifuge which can divide

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crystals from syrup. On top of that, the

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will dry and cool so it can be able to be ready to attend the

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liquid shops.