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The charts below show the performance of spending on roads and transport in four countries from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the performance of spending on roads and transport in four countries from 1990 to 2005. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the proportion of administration cost on ways and traffic in
Italia
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, Portugal, the UK and the USA between 1990 and 2005. Generally speaking,
it is clear that
overall
,
Italia
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Italy
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 and Portugal have higher road and transport costs.
Whereas
, the UK and USA expense relatively less. First off, in 1990, almost 20% of the government’s money was spent on transportation in
Italia
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. At the same time,
near
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 25%
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of the
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 significant majority of
cash
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 was
espensed
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 on
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 in Portugal. The next largest proportion was in 1995, which was roughly 25%. And
then
, In 1995 in
Italia
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 and Portugal in 2005, 20% of the state’s cash was spent on road in
Italia
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.
Similarly
,
this
 cost close to 23% in both countries in 2000.
On the other hand
, over the past 15 years, the proportion of government spending on roads and transportation in the UK during
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 four time periods is extremely similar, all approximately 10%.
However
,
this
 percentage in the USA faced moderate growth, which increased
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 5%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words italia with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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