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The table details the international tourist arrivals in millions in 8 countries in 2009 and 2010 and the changes (in percentages)

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The given table gives information about the number of foreign tourists visiting 8
countries
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 (measured in millions) in the years 2009 and 2010
as well as
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 the proportion of the
changes
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 (in percentages).
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that most of the mentioned nations witnessed a considerable increase in the rate of international visitors. Particularly, France received the highest figure. In terms of
changes
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, Germany was the lead in
this
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 category.
However
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, the opposite trend was true in Hong Kong. From the table,
countries
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 with small percentages of
changes
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 included developed nations: France, the USA, the UK, and Spain.
In particular
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, France had no
changes
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 since there were 76
million
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 tourists recorded in both given years. In 2009, the USA welcomed 66
million
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, and the UK and Spain both had 55
million
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 visitors. Next year, these
countries
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 only gained around 1-2
million
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 more. Albeit the rise, the rate of change was all below 4%.
In contrast
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, the larger proportion of
changes
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 was in Germany, China, and Turkey. These
countries
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 started off with only 10, 22 and 32
million
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 visitors respectively, which was far lower compared to the aforementioned
countries
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.
However
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, the figure for these nations almost doubled in the year after.
This
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 led to big
changes
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 in proportion (109% for Germany, 55% for China and 33% for Turkey). Hong Kong was the only country that followed the opposite pattern as the data dropped from 10
million
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 in 2009 to 9
million
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 in 2010 registering an 11% decline.
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