Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should work in the country where they did their training. Other believe that they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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It is argued that
professionals
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,
such
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as physicians and technicians, should
work
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in the
country
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where they received their education,
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others
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that it should depend on their choice
,
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if they want to
work
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in another
country
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working in
an other
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another
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country
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give
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them freedom,
but
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I believe that
professionals
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should
work
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in the
country
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from where they graduated. Literate people, like doctors and engineers, should
work
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in the
country
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from where they completed their education because it's their duty to serve their
country
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.
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is to say
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that, government
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government
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the government
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had
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a huge amount of money on their training. So, now it is their responsibility to give back to their
country
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, in developing
countries
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, sometimes there is a shortage of skilled workers, So,
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school of thought that
professionals
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should
work
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in their
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must
fulfill
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that gap.
On the other hand
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,
professionals
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should
free
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be free
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to
work
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in any
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they want because it
give
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gives
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them
independency
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,
by
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working in
an other
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another
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country
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would make them share their knowledge with other professional people.
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,
according to
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university research, educated individuals who
work
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in other
countries
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have more advanced knowledge related to their field because they
work
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in different situations, with various people from diverse
background
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. Despite
this
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, I strongly believe that working in their own
countries
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is more beneficial for themselves or for their
countries
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. In conclusion,
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professionals
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professionals'
professional's
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desire
of working
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to work
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in
an other
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another
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country
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is good for their own future but
this
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thing will not give any kind of advantage to their own
country
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.
That is
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why,I stand with the viewpoint of working in their own
country
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • professionals
  • doctors
  • engineers
  • required
  • training
  • home country
  • cultural
  • linguistic
  • advantages
  • economic impact
  • free
  • another country
  • globalization
  • international collaboration
  • improving
  • skills
  • knowledge
  • experience
  • opinion
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