Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should work in the country where they did their training. Other believe that they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that
professionals
, such
as physicians and technicians, should work
in the country
where they received their education, while
others thought
that it should depend on their choiceWrong verb form
think
,
if they want to Remove the comma
apply
work
in another country
. Although
working in an other
Correct your spelling
another
country
give
them freedom, Correct subject-verb agreement
gives
but
I believe that Correct word choice
apply
professionals
should work
in the country
from where they graduated.
Literate people, like doctors and engineers, should work
in the country
from where they completed their education because it's their duty to serve their country
. This
is to say,
Correct word choice
that, government
government
had Add an article
the government
spend
a huge amount of money on their training. So, now it is their responsibility to give back to their Change the verb form
spent
country
. For instance
, in developing countries
, sometimes there is a shortage of skilled workers, So, this
school of thought that professionals
should work
in their country
must fulfill
that gap.
Change the spelling
fulfil
On the other hand
, professionals
should free
to Add a missing verb
be free
work
in any country
they want because it give
them Change the verb form
gives
independency
. Replace the word
independence
Moreover
, by
working in Change preposition
apply
an other
Correct your spelling
another
country
would make them share their knowledge with other professional people. For example
, according to
university research, educated individuals who work
in other countries
have more advanced knowledge related to their field because they work
in different situations, with various people from diverse background
. Despite Fix the agreement mistake
backgrounds
this
, I strongly believe that working in their own countries
is more beneficial for themselves or for their countries
.
In conclusion, professionals
desire Change noun form
professionals'
professional's
of working
in Change preposition
to work
an other
Correct your spelling
another
country
is good for their own future but this
thing will not give any kind of advantage to their own country
. That is
why,I stand with the viewpoint of working in their own country
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