The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The diagram below shows the process for recycling plastic bottles.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram presents the process that how plastic
bottles
be addressed and reproduced in a specialised factory.
Overall
, the entire cyclical process consists of 9 main steps, including collecting, crushing and reproducing. Based on the flow chart, the garbage truck first collects
such
rubbish from the recyclable ash bin, where residents threw their
bottles
before, and transmits it to the Recycling Center.
Subsequently
, in order to select recyclable
bottles
, workers must sort these plastics and separate them from useless ones. Once
such
selected
bottles
are compressed into blocks, they
then
go through a machine that plastics are crushed into pieces by it and in turn be washed in a container below the crushing device. Afterwards, clean plastic fragments are poured into another machine, from where they are transformed into pellets. Before forming into raw material for
further
production, plastic pellets need to be heated by means of fire underground. Ultimately, some of the end items made of the raw material, like boxes, clothes and recyclable bags will
then
return to the ash bins after a period of use.
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