This line graph represents how much wast was produced by three factories between 2000 and 2015.

This line graph represents how much wast was produced by three factories between 2000 and 2015.
The line chart illustrates the quantity of
waste
produced by the three companies, namely A,
B
, and
C
over the span of 15 years from 2000 to 2015.
It is clear that
while
the
amount
of garbage from
Company
C
increased significantly during the period, the opposite was true for figures of
Company
A and
Company
B
In 2000,
Company
A's
amount
of
waste
reached its highest point during the examined time, at 12
tonnes
, orderly followed by that of
Company
B
and
Company
C
at roughly 9
tonnes
and over 4
tonnes
. Over the next 10 years, a moderate drop was witnessed in wastes produced by
company
A, at 9
tonnes
,
while
this
figure for
company
C
experienced a gradual increase to 6
tonnes
. In the meantime,
Company
B
's
amount
of
waste
fluctuated and reached its peak in 2005, at around 10
tonnes
,
then
dropped significantly to roughly 7
tonnes
.
By contrast
, starting at over 4
tonnes
, the quantity of garbage
company
C
produced increased to over 7
tonnes
during the mentioned period.
Company
C
's wastes had surpassed that of
company
B
in 2010, at around 7
tonnes
before continuing to surpass that of
company
A in 2013, at roughly 9
tonnes
,
then
became the highest figure
at the end
of the period, with nearly 11
tonnes
. Meanwhile, the
amount
of
waste
from
Company
A and
Company
B
continued to fall significantly. Eventually,
Company
B
even ranked third among the three companies regarding the
waste
quantity, ending up at around 3
tonnes
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words waste, b, c, amount, company, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
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