The charts below give information about the typical temperatures in London, New York, and Sydney as well as total hours of sunshine for each city.
The line graph displays information about the common
temperature
in three different cities and different months. and the table shows the whole sunshine hours
for them.
Overall
, the highest temperature
in summer was reported in New York
and the one for winter was reported for Sydney
. Furthermore
, New York
has far more hours
of sunshine on sunny days.
In January, the temperature
for Sydney
was the highest, with almost 25. However
, in this
month, the typical temperature
of New York
and London was almost one-fifth and two-thirds of Sydney
respectively. Between August and September, the common temperature
in New York
picked at just below 30. Similarly
, in this
period, the temperature
of London made its peak at around 23, while
the lowest temperature
was reported in Sydney
at approximately 13.
New York
had the highest total hours
of sunshine with around 2,500 hours
, while
London had the least with 1180 hours
. The one reported for Sydney
was a little less than New York
, with approximately 2400 hours
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