The charts below give information about the typical temperatures in London, New York, and Sydney as well as total hours of sunshine for each city.

The charts below give information about the typical temperatures in London, New York, and Sydney as well as total hours of sunshine for each city.
There are two charts in the questions. Line one illustrates the typical temperatures in 12 months of a year in three cities, namely
London
, New
York
, and
Sydney
, and table one shows the total
hours
of sunshine in those cities. It can be seen that New
York
has the most
hours
of sunshine, at 2535
hours
, which is a little bit higher than that of
Sydney
with 2473
hours
,
while
sunshine
hours
in
London
is just one half to that of the other two cities, at 1180
hours
.
Besides
,
London
and New
York
have similar temperature changes during the year, which is hottest in August and months around and coldest in February and months around,
while
Sydney
is
in contrast
. Starting below 5
degrees
in January, the temperature in New
York
continues to climb to its peak at nearly 30
degrees
in August before falling down to approximately 5
degrees
in December.
Although
a similar line structure is
also
recorded in
London
, the fluctuation in
this
city is still a little bit smaller than that of New
York
. The coldest month in
this
city is December, at around 7
degrees
, and August is the hottest month of the year with just above 22
degrees
.
Sydney
,
however
, records a complete difference. The temperature cycle of
this
city commences its hottest period in January, at above 25
degrees
and
then
gets colder until reaching its lowest in August, at below 15
degrees
before climbing up to nearly 25
degrees
in December.
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