Some people say that the internet is the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another?
It is true that we are in a digital age. Some
people
say that because of the internet
all Add a comma
internet,
people
can communicate with one another easily around the world. I totally agree with this
statement because we can contact anyone live in a minute if both parties have internet
connection. Add an article
an internet
This
digital era helps to attach
everyone globally. We can see Verb problem
attract
people
use smart devices more often than earlier, even young kids also
use their own devices to connect with others. Therefore
, communication becomes
easier than before. Wrong verb form
has become
Older
days, if we Change preposition
In older
want
to communicate with someone in a different city or country we had to send them Wrong verb form
wanted
a
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an
mail
, it normally took Correct your spelling
email
to receive
one month. Verb problem
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This
process was quite difficult and sometimes broke relationships in
each other. Change preposition
with
However
, people
familiar with the Change preposition
for people
internet
communication is more interesting and easy. For instance
, if someone working abroad internet
will help him to connect with his family members, loved ones and friends. They can get instant reply
from them Fix the agreement mistake
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as well as
they can have video calls. WhatsApp, email, Facebook, Viber
these kinds of apps will help Correct word choice
and Viber
easy
communication methods. Change preposition
with easy
On the other hand
, like everything has pros and cons internet
is also
the same. Nowadays we can see most of the young generation addicted to social media, it is not good for their physical health and it leads them apart from their families and social relationships. When they have free time they use Facebook, Instagram, TikTok, etc. As a result
of this
, new
generation lives away from their family and friends. In conclusion, the Correct article usage
the new
internet
benefits outweigh the disadvantages so, the user has to control how much he uses internet
and how Add an article
the internet
does
he balances his social life and family life. Unnecessary verb
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Then
there is no doubt the internet
connect
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connects
people
together and it makes our task easy.Submitted by piuymi.madu on
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Task Response
Ensure that each paragraph has a clear topic sentence that directly addresses the essay prompt.
Coherence and Cohesion
Work on organizing ideas in a more logical order and use transition words to better connect ideas throughout the essay.
Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
