The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO²) emissions per person in the United Kingdom , Sweden, Italy, and Portugal between 1967 and 2007
The given line graph illustrates details concerning the average
emissions
per individual of carbon dioxide in the four countries from 1967 to 2007.
Generally, it is obvious witness that the United Kingdom constantly remained the most carbon dioxide emissions
during the 40 years. What's more, Sweden was the second most country in the first decade but afterwards it became the least emissions
nation of the four countries.
Last
but not least, Italy and Portugal were consistently incline their emission in the duration.
Upon closer examination of the data, the United Kingdom emitted over 10 tonnes
per person
in 1967, after a continuous downward, the emissions
declined to about 9 tonnes
per person
. on the other side, Sweden was 8 tonnes
per person
initially
in 1967, and it soared to 10 after a decade, nonetheless
, it started to drop from 1977 to 2007 with 5 tonnes
per person
.
Furthermore
, we can observe that Italy was 4 tonnes
per person
in 1967 and remained upward in 40 years to be 7 tonnes
per person
. Portugal has the same upward curve, it started at 1 ton, ultimately grew to 5 tonnes
, which is just over Sweden'emission in 2007.Submitted by steven057770 on
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