Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that developed countries should accept more
people
and
initially
help them with something to eat and find a place to live.
This
essay totally agrees with that statement because many
people
move to new places without having enough properties and they do not know anyone who could help them adapt to a new
country
. When the majority
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their living
country
, they mostly go with
limited
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budget because
people
must pay their debts from the previous place and moving expenses cost very much.
Therefore
they sell their valuable properties to be able to pay the bills. In Uzbekistan,
for example
, every year, citizens participate in
DV
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the DV
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program to win a Green Card which allows them to live in the US legally. So if they win, they usually exchange what they have
to
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money to afford to pay just for tickets and hostels on their way. Refugees mostly do not know
people
in advance in the new
country
and they need to get used to the environment they have never been
before
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.
Despite
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they are alone or with family, they should know which area is safe and affordable to accommodate.
Thus
, refugees will need support from the state, at least, with suggestions to understand how to survive there and not
to
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become homeless.
For example
, the number of homeless
people
in the US is increasing year by year and most of them are refugees who did not have any acquaintance after moving.
To conclude
, I strongly agree that it would be fair if countries
provide
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newcomers with initial help to adapt to a new place because they are not familiar with new citizens who can help them and do not have enough money to start living in a costly
country
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Refugees
  • Asylum seekers
  • Humanitarian aid
  • Integration
  • Multiculturalism
  • Economic impact
  • Public services
  • International law
  • Conventions relating to the status of refugees
  • Labor market
  • Cultural enrichment
  • Burden-sharing
  • Resettlement programs
  • Host country
  • Border security
  • Comprehensive policy
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