The chart below shows five countries where Australia students studied from 2004 to 2006
The chart describes the changes in
Australia
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Australian
students
' destination
to study abroad over a period of three consecutive years.
In general, most of these nations attracted more Australian Fix the agreement mistake
destinations
students
during the time surveyed with the exception of Japan. Additionally
, the USA had the largest number of learners from Australia.
In 2004, the number of Australian students
choosing the USA and New Zealand was almost the same, at about 2500, making a gap of 1000 in comparison with that of the UK. In the next two years, while
the USA remained
the upward trend to peak at 2800, both New Zealand and the UK witnessed a slight increase and stabilized at 2600 and 1600, respectively in 2006.
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In contrast
, Germany and Japan attracted fewer pupils from Australia than their counterparts. Commencing at 300, the figure for Germany reduced slightly before going up to end at 400. Likewise
, Japan shared the same pattern with Germany when attracted around 400 students
in 2004 and 2006, despite a minimal decrease in 2005.Submitted by dungcbn on
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