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The graphs provide the information of seafood impoerts in united states, between the year 1986 and 2016, with the prediction for 2026 and illustrate,from which countries,the seafood was impoerted in 2016. write a summery and include 150 words

The graphs provide the information of seafood impoerts in united states, between the year 1986 and 2016, with the prediction for 2026 and illustrate,from which countries,the seafood was impoerted in 2016. write a summery and include 150 words
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The graphs provide the information of
seafood
impoerts
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imports
 in
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the united
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united states
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United States
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, between the
year
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years
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 1986 and 2016, with the prediction for 2026 and illustrate,from which countries,the
seafood
 was
impoerted
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imported
 in 2016.
Overall
,
seafood
imports
 tripled during the time of 1986 to 2016 and the top three countries
controlling
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the
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apply
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two-thirds of the whole market in the year
of
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2016.
However
,in the future,the
seafood
imports
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import
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 amount will slightly reduce in 2026. The
seafood
imports
 increased from about 6 billion in 1986 and around 10 billion in 1996.over the following 20
years
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 the amount of
seafood
imports
 doubled and crossed the 20
billoion
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billion
margine
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margin
.Despite the past growth,it is predicted that the amount will reduced by 2 billion in the year
of
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apply
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2026. In regard to the geographical structure of
imports
,
canada
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Canada
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,china and
thailand
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Thailand
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 hold 67% of the
tortal
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total
 market and
Indonitia
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Indonesia
,Vietnam and other countries imported the rest.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words seafood, imports with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "provide" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reduce" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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