The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
In the presented diagram, the
producing
Replace the word
production of
sugar
by sugar
cane as a manufacturing process is displayed .
Overall
, according to
the provided breakdown of this
process, producing sugar
can be accomplished in 7 steps, the first of these taking place in growing sugar
canes
and the last
steps
of which is drying and cooling Fix the agreement mistake
step
sugar
.
First of all, the process of making sugar
starts with growing sugar
canes
. Fix the agreement mistake
cane
Sugar
canes
are planted approximately
12-18 months. Change preposition
for approximately
Then
, Farmers harvest sugar
canes
by cutting and using Fix the agreement mistake
cane
sugar
Correct article usage
a sugar
canes
harvester simultaneously. Fix the agreement mistake
cane
Next,
Sugar
canes
Fix the agreement mistake
cane
are
crushed by the machine and the result of Correct subject-verb agreement
is
this
step is sugar
cane juices. Soon thereafter
, they use limestone
filter to purify juices.
Afterwards, Heat provides glue-like Correct article usage
a limestone
sugar
cane juice. Juices become syrup by a
evaporator. Change the article
an
Following
this
, Syrup is centrifuged by separating sugar
crystals and syrup by a centrifuger
. In the penultimate step, Correct your spelling
centrifuged
sugar
need
to be cool and dry.Change the verb form
needs
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Vocabulary: Replace the words sugar, canes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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