Some people think most crime is the result of circumstances. Otthers believes that most crime is cused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

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others think

criminals

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are naturally bad. In the writer's opinion, poor living conditions lead to illegal activities. When it comes to how the

drug

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can control human minds and cause many outlaw activities. To put it plainly,

drugs

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an addictive substances which affect to nervous system and make the user not only have a happy emotion but

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an illusion, so they want more

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.

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,

drug

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users commit an offence to buy

drugs

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and satisfy their cravings.

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, when police test the

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burglaries , murders and pickpocketings they recognize the high opium concentration in these

criminals

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' bodies.

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, the

drug

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is one of the reasons for the high rate of

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.

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,there are some who argue that

people

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who are predisposed to violent behaviours have the potential to become

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. To explain in

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detail,

people

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with aggressive and impatient personality traits can not control their feelings so they may use violence to solve problems, not only that, these

people

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break the law to relieve furiousness and neglect their own thinking.

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point may be true but they can inhibit their personality if they educate in a good way.

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the writer's perspective, poverty condition makes poor

people

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turn to offenders.

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is because

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in poor neighbourhoods struggle to meet basic needs so they break legal regulations and become

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as a way of survival.

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, the rate of

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in many slums is higher than in other places because they lack access to basic needs and have poor circumstances.

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, committing

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is a means of survival in poor living conditions. In conclusion,

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criminals

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can have bad personality traits naturally, they can change through good education and environment. The main reason for

crime

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is not only the effect of

drugs

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on the nervous system but

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the poverty condition that makes them become

criminals

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to survive.