Some people think most crime is the result of circumstances. Otthers believes that most crime is cused by people who are bad by nature. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

There are many beliefs that circumstances are the reason for most

crime

while

others think

criminals

are naturally bad. In the writer's opinion, poor living conditions lead to illegal activities. When it comes to how the

drug

can control human minds and cause many outlaw activities. To put it plainly,

drugs

an addictive substances which affect to nervous system and make the user not only have a happy emotion but

also

an illusion, so they want more

drugs

.

Therefore

,

drug

users commit an offence to buy

drugs

and satisfy their cravings.

For instance

, when police test the

drug

of

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burglaries , murders and pickpocketings they recognize the high opium concentration in these

criminals

' bodies.

As a consequence

, the

drug

is one of the reasons for the high rate of

crime

.

However

,there are some who argue that

people

who are predisposed to violent behaviours have the potential to become

criminals

. To explain in

further

detail,

people

with aggressive and impatient personality traits can not control their feelings so they may use violence to solve problems, not only that, these

people

break the law to relieve furiousness and neglect their own thinking.

This

point may be true but they can inhibit their personality if they educate in a good way.

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the writer's perspective, poverty condition makes poor

people

turn to offenders.

This

is because

people

in poor neighbourhoods struggle to meet basic needs so they break legal regulations and become

criminals

as a way of survival.

For example

, the rate of

crime

in many slums is higher than in other places because they lack access to basic needs and have poor circumstances.

As a result

, committing

crime

is a means of survival in poor living conditions. In conclusion,

although

criminals

can have bad personality traits naturally, they can change through good education and environment. The main reason for

crime

is not only the effect of

drugs

on the nervous system but

also

the poverty condition that makes them become

criminals

to survive.