Some people believe that they should be able to keep all the money they earn, and should not have to pay tax to the state. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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as food, water, shelter and medicinal needs. Not only that society has to use them for children's school needs including fees.The community tend to keep future plans and Linking Words
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should take the responsibility of proper handling of the income. So, I strongly believe that as a community we have the responsibility to put our hands on to protect what we have now. The easiest way for Linking Words
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