Your next-door neighbour likes to listen to music late at night. Because of the loud music, you often lose sleep. Write a letter to the building manager. In your letter describe the situation explain the problems it is causing you offer at least one solution
Dear sir/madam
I am living in one of your apartments which is situated on Bath Road, Kingston. I am writing
this
letter to complain about my neighbour Mr. Simran who lives in the apartment next to me.
To begin
with, he loves listening to music till late at night with a loud noise which disturbs my sleep every night. Firstly
, I thought they had any kind of function in their home but after the continuous noise for the last
two weeks, I want to complain about him. Furthermore
, I would like to grab your attention because it affects my health such
as insomnia, headaches, and irritable behaviour.
Moreover
, my manager is also
noticing that, nowadays, I am getting tired easily at work and taking more off from work because of my health issues. Nonetheless
, I tried to talk to him but he was rude to me as he said he liked this
kind of environment.
Therefore
, I would like to say that there should be some rules on loud music and late-night parties, especially on weekdays such
as no noise after 10 pm on weekdays and midnight on weekends. As a result
,it is beneficial for me as well as
for other community members. Hope to hear from you soon with serious action. Thanks in advance.
Yours faithfully,
Gurpinder KaurSubmitted by buttargurpinder73 on
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task response
Ensure that you clearly outline the problems caused by the neighbor's behavior and provide a specific solution to address the issue.
coherence and cohesion
Use transitional words and phrases to improve the flow of ideas and coherence between sentences and paragraphs.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite