In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food. To what extent do you agree or disagree whit this opinion?

It is a main health issue of increasing the number of diseased people

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junk

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throughout the world. Some think that the best way to reduce the issue is to add an extra tax on these types of

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. I strongly agree with that, as I personally believe most humans do not spend money on expensive food items. Through

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,essay I hope to discuss it in advance.

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, snack

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and beverages are the most common reason

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diseases

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as hypertension, malignancies, and diabetic mellitus among people. Not only the above conditions

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but there is

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a plethora of list can have

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unhealthy diets. Caters

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as bites, and short eats are popular

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among the young generation and those kinds of

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contains

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unhealthy fats and harmful compositions

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as monosodium gluconate. That who tend to consume them on a daily basis, are highly vulnerable to cancers, fatty liver,

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diabetes

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mellitus, high blood pressure etc.

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one of my uncles, who is drastically likes to eat instant

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, got a fatty liver in his 40s and still on treatments with modified dietary habits. Even though

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health specialists make community awareness frequently, they won't be able to see an improvement up to now.

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, people are educated enough to realize the forthcoming problem with unhealthy meals. But they have a tough and busy schedule in their lives.

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they prefer to get easy catering than cooking or having healthy meals daily in somehow. Not only that there is an addiction type ability with junk

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once eat them.

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, if the government add an extra wedge on these kinds of

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and beverages, most of the portion in the community won't be able to spend money to buy them even

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like to eat.

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of that, they are able to have

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diet with that money.

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, it's not easy to reduce the consumption of unhealthy

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through awareness programmes or

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things. Most easiest way of achieving that target is to fine more from junk

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by adding taxes. So, I personally agree with that statement.