The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The diagram illustrates how instant

noodles

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are produced and packed for

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the sellig

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sellig

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selling

process in stores in 8 stages,

wich

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which

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am going to explain in

this

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essay.

Firstly

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, the transfer trucks ship the floor from storage silos to the

noodle producing

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noodle-producing

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factory.

To begin

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, the process starts by adding water and oil to the floor and

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putting

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it in mixers. After mixing

floor

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the floor

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with water and oil, the rollers make dough sheets from the mixed liquids

and after than

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the dough sheets get cut and

dough

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the dough

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strips are ready for

alteration

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the alteration

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procces

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process

and become noodle discs in the fifth stage.

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the next phase, the

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noodles

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noodle

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discs will

get

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cooked in oil and

then

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dryed

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dried

The next step is

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to put

dryed

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dry

and cooked

noodles

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in the cups and add vegetables and spices to them.

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the

last

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part of the

procces

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process

, the machine would add

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a label

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label

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labels

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to the cups and seal them to get ready for leaving the factory and get

transfered

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transferred

to the markets. In conclusion, it is a long and hard process to produce

noodles

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and get them ready for selling in the markets.

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6
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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

187 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

manufactured
ingredients
dough
rolled out
thin strips
steaming process
partially cooked
fried
dehydrating
packaged
distribution
quality control
standards
flavoring powder
sauce packet
traditional pasta
dehydration
instant cooking

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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summaries information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

in many countires nowadays, consumers can go to a supermarket and buy food produced all over tha world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and Clean energy. The benefits of nuclear energy far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people prefer to travel around town by car, while others prefer public transit such as bus, train, or subway. Discuss both these positions and give your own opinion.