The chart below gives information about how many European citizens of various age groups frequently went to the gym from 1990 to 2010.

The chart below gives information about how many European citizens of various age groups frequently went to the gym from 1990 to 2010.
The provided diagram presents data on the participation of four different
age
groups in Europe in
gym
attendance, at least once a month, from 1990 to 2010.
Overall
, there was an upward trend in the percentage of
gym
visits over the three-decade period between 1990 and 2010. In 1990, individuals aged 25 to 34 exhibited the highest likelihood of visiting the
gym
within a month.
However
, by 1998, the 18-24
age
group
surpassed the 25-34
age
group
in terms of
gym
attendance, and
this
trend continued
thereafter
. The percentage of
gym
participation among the 18-24
age
group
reached its peak in 2006.
Subsequently
, it experienced a significant decline until 2008 before starting to rise again. Despite these fluctuations, the 18-24
age
group
remained the most frequent visitors to the
gym
throughout the entire period.
On the other hand
, both of the elderly
age
groups saw a steady increase in
gym
presence over the years.
However
, by the end of 2010, their popularity ranking had not changed compared to 1990.
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