Some people think it is more important to plant more trees in open areas in towns and cities than provide more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The majority of

people

believed that it is vital to plant

trees

in open

areas

in towns and cities

than

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rather than

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using

that

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them

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for housing.

This

writer disagrees with

this

statement and will explain in the following passages. Nowadays, the population is increasing day by day

lead

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leading

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to the requirement

of

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for

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housing, the

place

need

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to provide for them to build houses. In fact, the price of

place

for housing

rise

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rises

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up

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apply

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currently

this

also

become one of the reasons why there

no

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is no

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space for planting

trees

.

For instance

, if the government use the open

areas

for planting, it can not solve the problems of accommodation for citizens.

Furthermore

, planting

trees

made life inconvenient because of

job

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the job

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properties of some

people

. There are many

people

that move frequently from

place

to

place

so they need more than a house. On top of that, planting

trees

around the

place

where inhabitants reside

in

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apply

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sometimes danger

themselves

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apply

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because of snakes. Some circumstances had shown

people

got into emergency positions because of

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being bitting

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bitting

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bitten

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by snakes. Planting

trees

is one of the good ways to keep the earth green but it is not necessary to

grown

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grow

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in open

areas

due to

planting in every

streets

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street

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.

For example

,

instead

of using open places,

trees

can be planted on the streets and around houses as much as

it

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they

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can. Taking everything into conclusion,

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using

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use

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using

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open places for planting

make

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makes

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the earth

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apply

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more

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apply

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green but there are some reasons that it can not be performed. Housing is the better way of using open

areas

.