The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site

The maps below show an industrial area in the town of Norbiton, and planned future development of the site
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The prone maps highlight information about an industrial zone in Norbiton's centre and its newly designed scheme for future development in the near future.
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, it can be seen that the area is likely to be a residential place
instead
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of a manufacturing zone and a bridge will be built over the River. Looking at the details, the intersection will be expanded with novel streets ;at which point, one of them will be connected to the bridge
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the shelter on the north of the town. Followingly, a playground and an institution are going to be constructed on the east side of the conurbation.
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, a small intersection will be built with a view to connecting it to the oldest one from the south. Interestingly, Shops and a Medical centre both are going to be constructed between intersections. It is obvious that the area would be vacant from any factory in the final step.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • industrial area
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • manufacturing
  • facilities
  • transition
  • planning
  • commercial
  • residential
  • renovation
  • urban planning
  • sustainability
  • environmental impact
  • local economy
  • rejuvenation
  • construction
  • modernization
  • accessibility
  • demolition
  • gentrification
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