Some people believe that elementary and high school students should be taught how to manage money because it is an important life skill. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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agree that high

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students should be taught how to manage

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it is an important life skill but there are even some disadvantages

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intitution

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institution

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students how to save

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will get

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many advantages from it. Children will learn how to spend

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they will get so knowledge about it.

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society

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on

money

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have great importance in

people

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life.

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student

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get information about managing about saving

money

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that can help

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a lot

on

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saving

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helping others, and he or she will even give knowledge to

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kids

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also

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Hence

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ways

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some drawback

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this kinds

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of subject. Even for some people it is

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of time.

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boring

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of still

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by

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parents even.

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subject

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should be

maindetary

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mandatory

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knowleghe

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knowledge

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Teacher

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should teach a nation about things. Kisa should get

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to select

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in which they are

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interested

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Parent

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should teach

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about the knowledge of basic

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so

it

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can be helpful to

her

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in

school

days.

To conclude

, I agree that high

school

should be taught to save

money

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Thus

, in my own opinion, saving

money

as well as

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money

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very

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important life skill.