Some people believe that elementary and high school students should be taught how to manage money because it is an important life skill. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

I strongly
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agree that high
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students should be taught how to manage
money
because in my own
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it is an important life skill but there are even some disadvantages
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this
. If
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intitution
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students how to save
money
then
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will get
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many advantages from it. Children will learn how to spend
money
then
they will get so knowledge about it.
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,
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society
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on
money
. Learning about
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have great importance in
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life.
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student
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students
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get information about managing about saving
money
than
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then
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that can help
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saving
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helping others, and he or she will even give knowledge to
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kids
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also
.
Hence
, high
school
students should be taught how to manage
money
. As every coin have two sides in
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some drawback
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this kinds
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of subject. Even for some people it is
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of time.
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of still
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by
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parents even.
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subject
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should be
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mandatory
.
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knowleghe
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knowledge
about saving
money
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Teacher
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should teach a nation about things. Kisa should get
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to select
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in which they are
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interested
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Parent
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should teach
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about the knowledge of basic
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so
it
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can be helpful to
her
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in
school
days.
To conclude
, I agree that high
school
should be taught to save
money
.
Thus
, in my own opinion, saving
money
as well as
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money
is
very
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important life skill.
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