The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given two line charts illustrate three electrical appliances holding
rate
and weekly housework Fix the agreement mistake
rates
hours
between 1920 and 2019.
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Overall
, It is obvious to discover that the three rates of people who own those appliances are all greatly increased in the duration. What's more, the curve of housework Linking Words
hours
every week is constantly downward. Use synonyms
Therefore
, we can find that there is a highly negative relationship between these two figures.
Looking into the data in more detail, Linking Words
Firstly
, in the upper graph, the washing machine had the highest holding rate with 40% in 1920, and it Linking Words
continue
to consistently grow in the next hundred Wrong verb form
continued
years
with 70% in 2019. Refrigerator shows a greatly soared during the first 40 Use synonyms
years
, from 0% in 1920 to 90% in 1960, Use synonyms
furthermore
, from 1980 to 2019, it consisted 100%. Linking Words
Lastly
, Vacuum Linking Words
cleaner
showed a continuous growed figure in the first 60 Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
years
, from 30% to 90%, and peaked at 100% from 2000 to 2019.
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On the other hand
, the initial housework Linking Words
hours
was 50 Use synonyms
hours
on a weekly basis, but after the non-stop decreased during the one hundred Use synonyms
years
, it became about 10 Use synonyms
hours
a week.Use synonyms
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