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you recently went to a program and thought one of the singer was very good. you want to tell him how you feel. Write a letter to the singer. In your letter say how you feel about his performance give details of your musical activities explain how you would like him to help you with your musical activities

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Hi Rahul, I hope
this
 letter finds you in good health and in high spirits! I am a huge fan of your
music
 and recently I had the opportunity to attend
you
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music
 concert in
mumbai
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Mumbai
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. It was fabulous and mesmerizing.
Furthermore
, I had the opportunity to see some of the biggest Bollywood stars in your program.
Moreover
, the presence of Shah Rukh Khan had completely electrified the stage.
Additionally
, you sang some of my favourite songs and I will always cherish
this
 memory. As for me, I am a musician and I have studied Hindustani Classical
music
from
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 Vidhya
Praishad
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Parishad
 in Kolkata. Currently, I have my own YouTube channel, which has one million subscribers.
Additionally
, I have a
music
 institution that teaches kids and youngsters vocals. I would request you to come and pay a visit to our
music
 institute and inspire our students to pursue their passion
in
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music
 .
Moreover
, I would like to collaborate with you
for
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 my new song.
This
 will provide me
a
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chance to learn and grow with you. Thank you for the wonderful event. Yours Sincerely, Shreyashi
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