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The Table Below Shows the Numbers of Visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The Table Below Shows the Numbers of Visitors to Ashdown Museum during the year before and after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table portrays
about
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the
amount
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 of
people
 who came upon seeing the
museum
 prior to and after it was renovated. The pie chart describes the results of Voyager and their feedback.
Overall
, the table and the chart represent the
people
's opinions under certain criteria. It has been clearly shown that before renovation the number of individuals visited was less when compared to renewable museums. Most of the public was disappointed in
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museum
. About 40 per cent of
people
 responded dissatisfied.
Subsequently
, when compared to the reconstructed
museum
 35 per cent of
people
 expressed very satisfaction. Comparing both reviews it has been found that the reconstructed
museum
 was liked by all individuals. In my ,opinion about 5 per cent of
people
 do not provide any response to the survey.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • refurbishment
  • visitor numbers
  • satisfaction levels
  • very satisfied
  • satisfied
  • neither satisfied nor dissatisfied
  • dissatisfied
  • very dissatisfied
  • survey results
  • comparison
  • impact
  • effectiveness
  • visitor experience
  • overall improvement
  • increase/decrease in visitors
  • positive feedback
  • negative feedback
  • visitor survey
  • survey period
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