the graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car bus or train between 1970 and 2000

the graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car bus or train between 1970 and 2000
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utilized for going to work by people from 1970 to 2020 in
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. Seen together, the most significant facts to emerge from the graph are that
car
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among individuals, and
train
increased slightly
whereas
bus
stayed at the same level during the full period. Looking at the information in more
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, 1970 showed
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stood at the highest with a mere 9
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commuters
while
4
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people, who used
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was used by 2million people.
Car
soared marginally to 6
million
commuters in 1995,
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level,
car
climaxed at the highest point with 9million individuals. Focusing on
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,
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this
transport system
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remaining 6million
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passenger
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passengers
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however
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witnessed
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to just under
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3 million
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at the final of
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.
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as
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which was
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popular transport system, between 1980 and 1990
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rose
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remarkably roughly to 3
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users,
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4 million
commuters on the
train
in 1995,
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culminated to
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5
million
passengers in the UK in 2000.
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