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The table shows the information of total health expenditure per capita in five countries in 2019.

The table shows the information of total health expenditure per capita in five countries in 2019.
#information #health #expenditure #capita #five #countries
The supplied table chart gives
the
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information about total health
expense
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expenses
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 in five countries namely Australia, Germany,
UK
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the UK
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,
japan
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Japan
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 and The United
states
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States
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 in 2019. The first glance at the chart , it can be clearly seen that The United
States
 had spent
higher
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the higher
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 amount of money
in
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on
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health
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the health
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 department
rather
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than
other
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the other
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 four countries which was around 11
milion
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million
 dollars. At the same
time
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 Germany spent around half of the money that
US
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the US
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 spent which was 6,646 dollars.
While the
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 total expense of Japan and the UK was almost
same
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 which was 4,823 and 4,652 respectively. The total expenditure of Australia was almost two times less than The
Unites
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States
 around 5,187 dollars in
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 year.
To conclude
, we can see that The United
States
spend
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highest
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the most
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 money on
health
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the health
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 sector
whereas
 Australia's total expense was least
from
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of
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 all other countries.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words states with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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