You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011.

Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart compares
amount
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the amount
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of money which
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was doneted
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doneted
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donated
by five different
organization
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organizations
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to developing countries from 2008 to 2011.
Overall
,
It is clear that
the most
amount
was given by
organization
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Organization
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2
while
the least
amount
was given by
organization
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Organization
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4.
To begin
with,
organzation
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organization
2 contributed the largest portion compared to other
organization
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organizations
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during the 4 years.which was about 2.8
billion
dollars during the first 2 years and in 2010 about 2.4 and
the
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apply
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around 2.7
billion
in 2011.which was the highest
amount
that
doneted
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donated
by all
organization
in any year.
Moreover
,
organization
3 was given
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an averagely
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averagely
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1.5
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of 1.5
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billion
dollars per year during the period.
Further more
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Furthermore
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,
organization
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organizations
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1,4 and 5 were contributed
comparetively
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comparatively
less
amount
of money
compered
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compared
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to
organization
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organizations
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2 and 3.
the
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The
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largest
amount
which
doneted
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donated
by
organization
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organizations
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1 ,4 and 5 were
aproximately
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approximately
0.9 ,0.7 and 1.2
billion
dollars respectively.It is noticeable that
organization
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Organization
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4 gave 0.7
billion
in 2008 and during the other 3 years they gave less than 0.5
billion
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, organization, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 6 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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