You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the amount of money given to developing countries from five organisations from 2008 to 2011. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The bar chart compares
Use synonyms
amount
of money which Add an article
the amount
Add a missing verb
was doneted
doneted
by five different Correct your spelling
donated
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organization
to developing countries from 2008 to 2011.
Fix the agreement mistake
organizations
Overall
,Linking Words
It is clear that
the most Linking Words
amount
was given by Use synonyms
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organization
2 Capitalize word
Organization
while
the least Linking Words
amount
was given by Use synonyms
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organization
4.
Capitalize word
Organization
To begin
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organzation
2 contributed the largest portion compared to other Correct your spelling
organization
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organization
during the 4 years.which was about 2.8 Fix the agreement mistake
organizations
billion
dollars during the first 2 years and in 2010 about 2.4 and Use synonyms
the
around 2.7 Correct article usage
apply
billion
in 2011.which was the highest Use synonyms
amount
that Use synonyms
doneted
by all Correct your spelling
donated
organization
in any year.Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
organization
3 was given Use synonyms
Correct article usage
an averagely
averagely
Change the word
average
1.5
Change preposition
of 1.5
billion
dollars per year during the period.
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Linking Words
Further more
,Correct your spelling
Furthermore
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organization
1,4 and 5 were contributed Fix the agreement mistake
organizations
comparetively
less Correct your spelling
comparatively
amount
of money Use synonyms
compered
to Correct your spelling
compared
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organization
2 and 3.Fix the agreement mistake
organizations
the
largest Capitalize word
The
amount
which Use synonyms
doneted
by Correct your spelling
donated
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organization
1 ,4 and 5 were Fix the agreement mistake
organizations
aproximately
0.9 ,0.7 and 1.2 Correct your spelling
approximately
billion
dollars respectively.It is noticeable that Use synonyms
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organization
4 gave 0.7 Capitalize word
Organization
billion
in 2008 and during the other 3 years they gave less than 0.5 Use synonyms
billion
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words amount, organization, billion with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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