In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sum of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Other believes the money should be spent on improving exisitng public transport. Discuss both views and give your own pinion.

Very

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big

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large

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amount of people think that spending money

to

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on

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railway

lines between cities is better than spending money

to

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on

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public

transport

,

during

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while

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others think

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the oppositely

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oppositely

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opposite

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. One of the main issues nowadays is how arrive to

your

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at your

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displacement as quickly as possible. It is

undenieable

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undeniable

that

transport

has

the

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an

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esspecially

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especially

part of our life. But there

no

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is no

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agreement on whether

to

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apply

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public

transport

or

railway

lines should be funded. A commonly held belief is that public

transport

is more comfortable to move from one to second places. As evidence of

this

point

to

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apply

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bus stations

ditributed

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contributed

to

whole

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the whole

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city.

Furthermore

, buses in way more than

trains

and

this

advantage will give them

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a decrease

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decrease

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time to arrive

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at significance

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significance

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place

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places

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. It could be explained by the fact that public

transport

is the national heritage of

vast

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the vast

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majority of

entire

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the entire

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world.

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, it leads to evidence

funding

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of funding

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public

transport

as maximum as possible

On the other hand

, some people claim that

trains

can

also

be

main

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the main

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transport

, despite their size.

For example

, they may mention

that

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apply

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underground

trains

so-called metro.

In

addition

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trains

are very very fast. The explanation lies

the

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in the

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fact that

railway

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the railway

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hasn't any traffic

jam

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jams

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,

very

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small amount of

railway

lights and average speed which

2

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is 2

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-3 times more than

bus

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the bus

a bus

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.

Therefore

, railways

also

have

chance

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to

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for

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attention. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account I would argue that railways must advance like another

transport

to move. Public

transport

already

have

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has

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their

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its

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ways,stations,

time

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and time

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shedule

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schedule

.I think new or improved railways will be

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more effectively

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effectively

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effective

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than only improved public

transports

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transport

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.