The diagram below shows the life cycle of a species of large fish called salmon
The diagram below depicts the cycle of life of the salmon fish.
Overall
it can be seen that these species pass away in three periods since they were born until become mature enough to return to the stream and lay eggs. their life cycle consists of four stages:eggs, fry, smolt and adult. Linking Words
While
the first three stages occur in freshwater the Linking Words
last
one takes place in saline water.
at the first steps, Salamon eggs are laid among small stones at the base of the reeds in the upper part of a river where the current is slow.after approximately 5 to 6 months fry flows quickly toward the lower river when they reach about 10 cm. The fry swims to the lower part of the river. after growing and feeding there for about 4 years they reached 12 cm.
they Linking Words
then
head to the ocean where they grow into adult salmon which average 70 to 76 centimetres long they spend about five years Linking Words
thereafter
and they immigrate upstream to their birthplace to spawn and the entire journey is repeated all over again.Linking Words
Submitted by rezasepas1367 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
▼
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
▼
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "reach" was used 2 times.
▼
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
▼