Many Offenders commit more crime after serving the first punishments. Why is this happening and what measures can be taken to tackle this problems.

It's common to hear about excessive criminals after facing

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the very first punishment of the life of the offenders. There may be a plethora of reasons for it and throughout

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essay hope to discuss

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the reasons and measures

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be

get

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to reduce them.

Firstly

, even doing unethical work is not fair most of the

lowbreakers

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lawbreakers

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have underlying causes to engage with

such

works. But after getting them to the high court ,usually authorities do not focus on the underline cause and they tend only to punish them.

Due to

that ,reason most of the offenders hate society. Not only that but

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they get uncomfortable

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with the community. When someone

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by

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jail after completing the punishment,

after

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also

he may

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ostracized from society. Offenders may disgusted by the people. Even though they do not have an idea to continue illegal work anymore

such

as murders, robberies

etc

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etc.

no one will trust them. When

continuasly

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continuously

continually

they have to face the same situation they may feel like misused citizens.

Therefore

there is a probability of regrouping with muderers and rejoin with

such

cases. In our ,village there was a boy who had to spend

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years in a probation centre after a robbery in a shop. When he returned back there was no one like to work with him or no one like to offer a job.

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he had no

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solution than rejoining

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a group who is doing the same kind of

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Secondly

, states should take enough

measurements

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to solve that matter.

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thing is to focus on the underline cause. Most of them are doing

such

things

due to

poverty, child abuse or addiction to alcohol. Governments have to find out the reason and can help to overcome

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it.

For instance

, if the problem is poverty authorities should give related training chances and should facilitate to join with career opportunities. Another solution is to improve

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personality to move with the society. The public should be well aware by states regarding offences and probation

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people will able to understand that we should not

ostraciz

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them and we are

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responsible

to protect

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them

instead

of it. As an

,

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example there was a person who had court as

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offender for a murder case and during his offence ,

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he had got enough knowledge and training

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experience

regarding pot preparation.

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started a small business and day by day he was able to develop it.

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now he is spending a good life in the village.

To sum up

, there is a high probability of doing unethical things again and again after facing

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the first offence period and

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goverment

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government

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proper steps to reduce the chance of

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