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The chart below given the information on the ages of population in yemen and italy in 2000

The chart below given the information on the ages of population in yemen and italy in 2000
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The provided pie chart shows statistics of the ages of
people
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 living in
Yemen
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 and Italy in the year 2000,
along with
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 predictions for 2050.
Overall
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, it is evident that the greatest proportion will consist of citizens aged 15-59 in both countries in 2050,
while
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 in 2000, in
Yemen
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, the majority of the
population
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 was aged 0-14 years. Interestingly, both countries will represent an increase in the elderly
population
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.
To begin
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, in 2000, in
Yemen
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 50.1% of the
population
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 were
people
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 aged 0-14, representing the highest number in the nation, followed by 46.3% for those who were 15-59 years old.
In contrast
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, the elderly
population
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 showed a figure of a mere 3.6%, indicating the lowest figure
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 the chart. In Italy, the biggest proportion of the graph was represented by citizens aged 15-59, at 61,6%. Following that, 24.1% of the
population
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 were individuals who were older than 60 and 14,3% for the 0-14 age group, respectively. Looking at the prediction for 2050, in
Yemen
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, the proportion of 15-
59 years old
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59-year-olds
 will increase to 57,3,
whereas
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 the number of
people
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 aged 0-14 will drop to 37.0 %.
Similarly
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, the percentage for the age group of 0-14 will decline to 11,5%.
On the other hand
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, the figure for the elderly age group will significantly rise to 42.3%, but the number for
people
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 aged 0-14 will fall to 11.5%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, yemen, population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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