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University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

#university #education #income
Many governments in the civil world make a strong effort in order to increase the
literacy
 level of their population without being dependent on their living standard. In
this
 ,regard I principally support the idea of reaching
literacy
 by any inhabitant of the country without any additional financial constraint and will support my opinion in the following paragraphs. The main reason for making full schooling reachable to all segments of the population is the importance of improved social welfare and well-being. To be more specific, there is a strong relationship between study level and well-being. Unfortunately, with a middle-level ,
literacy
 the chance of being economically independent and creating a future with socially reliable conditions is very difficult, almost impossible.
On the other hand
, it is inevitable that, when the value of an item increases the reachability
also
 becomes difficult, and it needs additional effort to achieve
this
. I think
,
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 the same approach can be applied to discipline, especially at a high level. Imagine, every graduate from middle school reaches the high education easily without any financial obstruction. In
this
 case, there would not be a reliable ranking of universities.
This
 is
also
 can be considered an injustice to the lecturers and professors. Most well-known universities in the world are private ones, and a strong financial background makes them keep the quality of personal and
literacy
 as high as possible. In conclusion,
although
 as a student I deeply support that higher education should be free of charge for everyone, the requirement of additional fees for quality study
also
 seems reasonable.
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