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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this can not be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change Discuss both and give your opinion

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Human
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 has had a detrimental effect on wildlife across the world. Some argue that
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 is irreversible, but others believe measures can be taken to bring forth a change. As for myself, I agree entirely with the idea that change is possible. On one hand, it is undeniable that human
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 has been harmful to the
environment
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. Particularly in the past two centuries, industrial development has been
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 the forefront and the
environment
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, including wildlife, has suffered
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. The past 200 years have seen deforestation
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 urban expansion, poaching for exotic animal parts (rhino horns, elephant tusks) and a surge of emissions from automobiles and factories. Some people think these activities are
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 of industrial expansion,
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 human development; on these grounds,
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, human
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 being detrimental to the
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 is inevitable.
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, certain actions can bring and are in the process of bringing changes to
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 trend. Today, environmental safety, including wildlife preservation, is considered more than ever before.
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both governments and private enterprises,
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 as Tesla, are not only researching sustainable and green energy sources
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 but
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 implementing them
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more and more countries are motioning laws to prohibit poaching
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 minimizing deforestation.
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 but not least, educational institutions are making more efforts to educate children about the importance of environmental preservation. The aforementioned measures, among many others, are becoming more widespread;
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, I believe human
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 will eventually still serve our development
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 not causing harm to the
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. In brief, ongoing research into alternative energy sources, implementation of pro-
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 laws and education concerning the
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 are contributing to preventing negative impacts on plants and animals from human
activity
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • negative impact
  • extinct
  • deforestation
  • pollution
  • habitat destruction
  • mitigate
  • reverse
  • stricter regulations
  • protected areas
  • endangered species
  • education and awareness campaigns
  • biodiversity
  • consequences
  • renewable energy sources
  • organic farming
  • eco-tourism
  • environmental regulations
  • sustainable practices
  • natural ecosystems
  • preserve biodiversity
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