you have seen an advertisement from a couple , who live in Australia for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. write a letter to the couple . in your letter explain why you think you would be suitable for the job. say what else you could do for the family. give your reasons for wanting the job.

Dear Sir/
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, I have just seen your advertisement and I find out that you are looking for a Persian teacher. ,Actually I come from IRAN and now I am studying geography at Melbourne University and I can teach the Persian language better than any other because I grew up in IRAN and I used to go to school in that country.
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I know a great deal number of old stories about IRAN's wars and legends
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your kids are going to be more familiar with our culture.
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it is my pleasure to help them with the math questions. When I was in my father's land, I had various classes in high school so helping with school's homework is easy for me ,
on the other
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I can get along well with children. As I said I'm studying at the university and and Australia is a high-maintenance country
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I need a flexible job and money to meet the ends. Absolutely I love kids and read the story for them. I can get along well with children. I await your prompt response. SAED TAVAZOIE
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • TESOL certification
  • Experience in teaching children
  • Knowledge of Australian culture
  • Passion for language education
  • Flexible and adaptable
  • Design customized lesson plans
  • Patient and understanding
  • Strong communication skills
  • Interpersonal skills
  • Participate in family activities
  • Enthusiasm for cultural exchange
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