In the future, it may be scientifically possible for people to live for 150 years. This could be good news for individuals but it may have negative consequences for our world as a whole. What are the benefits and risks of people living to 150?

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for 150

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the nation. The government should support science in improving health products because

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a whole nation.

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the advantages

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the scientifically possible for

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