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Writing Samples
Band 7.5

You and your family are moving to another country for work, and you are looking to buy a house there. Write a letter to a property agent. In your letter: Introduce yourself and your family Describe the type of accommodation that you hope to find Give your preference for the location of the accommodation

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to let you know that my family and I are planning to migrate to Sydney, Australia. I am Manpreet ,and I got a job in one of the reputative finance companies in Australia.
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, I
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 my parents and sister, are planning to move there. I need your assistance to buy a good
house
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. If I consider the accommodation type, I prefer
three-bedroom
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a three-bedroom
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house
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 so my family members will have their own privacy by having private rooms.
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, there should be a parking space available to park my vehicle. Moving on to the type of location, I am searching for a
house
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 which is in
quiet
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a quiet
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 area as I will work from home so, I want no distractions
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 doing my job.
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, it would be highly appreciated if you find the location of the
house
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 near downtown so it would be easy for us to visit the market on foot. It will be helpful if you can find
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 kind of accommodation for us before moving. I will wait for your response. Yours faithfully, Manpreet

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