The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.

The line graph below shows the household recycling rates in three different

countries between 2005 and 2015.
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The provided line chart illustrates the rates of household recycling in the
UK
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,
France
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, and
Germany
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over a span of 10 years from 2005 to 2015 by the percentages per year.
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, after a thorough analysis of the given chart, what can be seen is that recycling rates in both the
UK
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and
Germany
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witnessed a gradual increase over a span of 5 years,
whereas
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France
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, it had decreased by 2015 after being the highest. In the beginning, from 2005 to 2009, the recycling ratios of both
Germany
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and the
UK
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increased
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30% and 40% respectively, whilst in
France
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, it had dropped to 40% in 2009. Afterwards, between 2009 and 2015, the recycling proportions in both the
UK
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and
Germany
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rose roughly to 60% and 55%, respectively,
while
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in
France
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, rates dropped to almost 40% in 2015.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, france, germany with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household recycling rates
  • regional
  • line graph
  • countries
  • between
  • overall trends
  • changes
  • compare
  • ten-year period
  • differences
  • reasons
  • summarize
  • comment
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