The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018
The provided line graph reveals the number of closed and newly opened
shops
in one country from 2011 to 2018. Overall
, after the analysis of the given data, it could be plainly viewed that both closed and opened stores had seen considerable fluctuations from 2011 to 2018. Additionally
, by 2018, opened stores had been the lowest after being the highest at the beginning of the period. To begin
with, by 2012, opened shops
had plummeted to score approximately 4000, whilst closed ones had slightly decreased to 6000. During the following two years, closed shops
fluctuated to hit around 6500 in 2014, whereas
opened shops
rapidly increased to slightly more than 6000 with no considerable gap from closed ones. Moreover
, from 2014 to 2016, there was a dramatic decline in the number of closed shops
to nearly 500 in 2015, followed by a sharp increase to around 5000 in 2016. In the same period, opened shops
considerably decreased to 4000 before remaining constant by 2016. Concerning the remaining years, by 2017, both closed and opened stores had remained stable before a sharp decline in opened shops
to 3000 and a slight increase in closed shops
to nearly 5000.Submitted by essammohamed2015516 on
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