The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.
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seal
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seals
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dolphines
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dolphins
gormez
straits during the period between 2006 and 2018.
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Gormez
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Dolphines
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Dolphins
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wheals
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dolphines
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dolphins
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, seals have gradually Linking Words
grew
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Dolphines
have doubled their records from Correct your spelling
Dolphins
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2008.Change the article
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