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The chart shows the average daily minimum and maximum levels of air pollutants in 4 cities 2000. Write at least 150 words.

The chart shows the average daily minimum and maximum levels of air pollutants in 4 cities 2000. Write at least 150 words.
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The given bar chart presents the daily minimum and maximum levels of SO2 and N2O which caused pollution in 4 different
cities
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 (Los Angeles, Calcutta, Beijing and
Mexico
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City
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) in the year 2000.
Overall
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,
Mexico
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City
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 was by far the most contaminated by the two mentioned pollutants among the four
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. In Los Angeles, the quantity of SO2 emitted into the atmosphere was the lowest of all
cities
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, with a minimum average of 2
micro-grams
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 per m3 and a maximum average
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 times as much, at 10 micrograms. The levels of N2O emissions were much higher with the maximum daily average level reaching up to more than 100
micro-grams
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 per m3. Meanwhile, the atmosphere in
Mexico
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City
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 was severely polluted by SO2 and N2O emissions with the daily minimum and maximum averages of 80 and 113
micro-grams
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 per m3 respectively.
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 to Los Angeles and
Mexico
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City
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, the amount of pollution caused by N2O in Calcutta and Beijing was less than that caused by SO2. The daily average maximum figures for SO2 emissions were 59
micro-grams
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 per m3 in Calcutta and 130
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 per m3 in Beijing
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 the average maximum figures for N2O were just over 50
micro-grams
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 per m3 in both
cities
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.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 78%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words n, cities, mexico, city, micro-grams, m with synonyms.
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