The chart shows the average daily minimum and maximum levels of air pollutants in 4 cities 2000. Write at least 150 words.

The chart shows the average daily minimum and maximum levels of air pollutants in 4 cities 2000.

Write at least 150 words.
The given bar chart presents the daily minimum and maximum levels of SO2 and N2O which caused pollution in 4 different
cities
(Los Angeles, Calcutta, Beijing and
Mexico
City
) in the year 2000.
Overall
,
Mexico
City
was by far the most contaminated by the two mentioned pollutants among the four
cities
. In Los Angeles, the quantity of SO2 emitted into the atmosphere was the lowest of all
cities
, with a minimum average of 2
micro-grams
per m3 and a maximum average
five
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times as much, at 10 micrograms. The levels of N2O emissions were much higher with the maximum daily average level reaching up to more than 100
micro-grams
per m3. Meanwhile, the atmosphere in
Mexico
City
was severely polluted by SO2 and N2O emissions with the daily minimum and maximum averages of 80 and 113
micro-grams
per m3 respectively.
In contrast
to Los Angeles and
Mexico
City
, the amount of pollution caused by N2O in Calcutta and Beijing was less than that caused by SO2. The daily average maximum figures for SO2 emissions were 59
micro-grams
per m3 in Calcutta and 130
micro-grams
per m3 in Beijing
while
the average maximum figures for N2O were just over 50
micro-grams
per m3 in both
cities
.
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