The graphs below show the number of marriages and divorces in the USA between 1970 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The graphs below show the number of marriages and divorces in the USA between 1970 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The above graphs provide important insights into the

overall

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trend of

marriages

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, divorces and various other marital

status

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statuses

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of adult Americans in 1970-2000. In regards to

number

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a number

the number

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marriages

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and divorces in the USA graph, beginning with

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marriages

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marriage

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numbers, the numbers above

illustrates

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illustrate

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a slow yet steady decline,

however

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, divorces stayed the same in terms of numbers at around 1 million. That being said, the percentage of divorced Americans

have

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has

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increased

due to

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the drop in new

marriages

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. In the second graph, American people

staying

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stay

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single by either never getting married, or

reported

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reporting

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as divorced. Regarding widowed status, it stayed the same

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for 30

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years

apart

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apply

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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words marriages with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "graphs" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

105 words

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A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: * give contact details for when you are away * give instructions on how to care for your pet * describe other household duties

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