The graphs below show the number of marriages and divorces in the USA between 1970 and 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The above graphs provide important insights into the
overall
trend of marriages
, divorces and various other marital status
of adult Americans in 1970-2000.
In regards to Change the wording
statuses
number
of Change the article
a number
the number
marriages
and divorces in the USA graph, beginning with marriages
numbers, the numbers above Change the noun form
marriage
illustrates
a slow yet steady decline, Change the verb form
illustrate
however
, divorces stayed the same in terms of numbers at around 1 million. That being said, the percentage of divorced Americans have
increased Correct subject-verb agreement
has
due to
the drop in new marriages
.
In the second graph, American people staying
single by either never getting married, or Wrong verb form
stay
reported
as divorced. Regarding widowed status, it stayed the same Wrong verb form
reporting
30
yearsChange preposition
for 30
apart
.Rephrase
apply
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