The bar charts display the results from a 2009 survey regarding people’s automobile in a European country.

The bar charts display the results from a 2009 survey regarding people’s automobile in a European country.
The bar charts display the results from a 2009 survey regarding
people
’s automobile purchasing habits in a European country.
Overall
, it can be seen that the majority of consumers tended to purchase a new car after five
years
or more of using their old vehicle. Meanwhile, secondhand
cars
were the most popular choice with
regards
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to the type of vehicle purchased. The first bar chart shows that approximately 52% of
people
in
this
particular country changed
cars
after 5 or more
years
, and roughly 37% changed
cars
after 3-4
years
. About 5% of
people
changed
cars
every two
years
, 1% of
people
changed every year, and approximately 3% of
people
never changed.
Furthermore
, about 2% of
people
didn’t even own a car. With regards to the type of vehicle purchased, approximately 68% of
people
chose to buy second-hand
cars
,
while
about 25% bought
brand new
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vehicles.
In addition
, roughly 10% of
people
sometimes
purchased
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either new or second-hand
cars
.
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