Controversy surrounds the issue of whether the nations with longer working
time
are monetary thriving. I completely agree with
this
idea and I do believe they can benefit from prolonging their working
time
but they would suffer from some social consequences.
On the one hand, extending working
time
brings a few advantages economically.
To begin
with, abundant recruiters who work desperately and input concentration industriously will receive considerable profits. With
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sake and interest soaring bring forth a hefty sum of tax, revenue which
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to monetarily success in an efficient manner.
Furthermore
, it is discernible that long average working hours
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active role, sustaining a country’s competitive power, motivating national potentiality,
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countless civics focus on their lives per se
instead
of becoming humdrum.
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fuel an unpredictable mushrooming for a domain.
On the contrary
,
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sustaining office
time
always
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for series of perilous
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such
as heart
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, obesity, depression or even perishing. As demonstrated by
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level of domestic strain from children,
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and work strain from enterprise or commercial competition those
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stability and demolish collective pillars of mutual spirit.
Additionally
, persistent office
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aggravate
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of a country. With
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of
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and personal income, people have superior purchasing capabilities which inevitably accompanies unaffordable prices and expensive items. More significantly, those
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may
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downscale hierarchy
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,
such
as abode or accommodation rent and living
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.
In a nutshell, the authority concerned ought to standardize
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working
time
and strike the balance between the job and leisure
time
. ….