The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.
This
bar chart depicts the digit Linking Words
number
of three kinds of ocean life organisms in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018. It is clear from the graph that, the Use synonyms
number
of Use synonyms
dolphins
has constantly increased over the years.Use synonyms
while
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whales
have similar numbers.
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According to
what is shown,in 2006, seals have recorded a her Linking Words
number
than other categories , which is nearly half, Use synonyms
while
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dolphins
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whales
accounted for 15 and 24 . Over the next four years , the population numbers have similar levels.Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
number
of seals has declined to 25 . Use synonyms
While
there was a slight increase in the Linking Words
number
of Use synonyms
whales
around 26 , and approximately 21
have been found Use synonyms
dolphins
.
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Furthermore
, in 2014,a gradual decline has been reported from 25 to 21, as numbers of Linking Words
whales
population, Use synonyms
as well as
for the seas.Linking Words
In contrast
,Linking Words
dolphins
have increased modestly over 30 . In the Use synonyms
last
four years, Linking Words
dolphins
had a higher rate than other species that reported more than half.Use synonyms
While
the whale's Linking Words
number
was the least.
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To sum up
, we could say that Linking Words
dolphins
have ranked the highest Use synonyms
number
among these species followed by seals.Use synonyms
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