The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.

The bar chart below shows numbers of seals, whales and dolphins recorded in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018.
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This
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bar chart depicts the digit
number
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of three kinds of ocean life organisms in the Gormez Straits from 2006 to 2018. It is clear from the graph that, the
number
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of
dolphins
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has constantly increased over the years.
while
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whales
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have similar numbers.
According to
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what is shown,in 2006, seals have recorded a her
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than other categories , which is nearly half,
while
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dolphins
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and
whales
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accounted for 15 and 24 . Over the next four years , the population numbers have similar levels.
However
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, the
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of seals has declined to 25 .
While
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there was a slight increase in the
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of
whales
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around 26 , and approximately 21  have been found
dolphins
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.
Furthermore
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, in 2014,a gradual decline has been reported from 25 to 21, as numbers of
whales
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population,
as well as
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for the seas.
In contrast
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,
dolphins
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have increased modestly over 30 . In the
last
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four years,
dolphins
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had a higher rate than other species that reported more than half.
While
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the whale's
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was the least.
To sum up
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, we could say that
dolphins
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have ranked the highest
number
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among these species followed by seals.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, dolphins, whales with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Bar chart
  • Recorded
  • Gormez Straits
  • Fluctuation
  • Seals
  • Whales
  • Dolphins
  • Height
  • Individuals
  • Steadily declined
  • Relatively stable
  • Lowest
  • Significant increase
  • Approximately
  • Slight recovery
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